There you go Oli - your first film review out of the way!
'No wonder then, that at the end of the film it's revealed the scenery is nothing more than a construction of the shattered mind of the film's protagonist, Francis.' Very interestingly written!
You could probably reduce the synopsis a little to just an outline of the story, and put most of your focus into the analysis, but that is just an observation...
It might also be good to enlarge your images and centre them, rather than wrapping the text around them - this makes it easier to read, and gives the reader an opportnity to have a good look at the image.
Your bibliography should be organised alphabetically by surname, so in this case, Ebert Kracauer Schönfeld
There you go Oli - your first film review out of the way!
ReplyDelete'No wonder then, that at the end of the film it's revealed the scenery is nothing more than a construction of the shattered mind of the film's protagonist, Francis.' Very interestingly written!
You could probably reduce the synopsis a little to just an outline of the story, and put most of your focus into the analysis, but that is just an observation...
It might also be good to enlarge your images and centre them, rather than wrapping the text around them - this makes it easier to read, and gives the reader an opportnity to have a good look at the image.
Your bibliography should be organised alphabetically by surname, so in this case,
Ebert
Kracauer
Schönfeld
Looking forward to what you made of 'Metropolis'!